You make independence

Adrian Cornejo

  You make independence

     

Why do us people always want to rely on other people and not be their own person? In this essay I'm 

going to be talking about the three main points of being independent. The main points are working hard, trusting yourself, and changing your mind.

The first rule of independence is hard work. One reason hard work is important is because if you don't do hard work, how do you work independently? For example, hard work is being independent. Since I was little my dad has taught me how to change the oil or the tires in a car and the outside maintenance so that when I'm older I can be my own independent man and not need to rely on other people. If you don't work hard, it doesn't matter whether it is school or work, you always rely on people to copy off of or to find someone to do your work and that's not independent. That is why I think hard work is a key point to being independent and not relying on anybody else.

The second key point to being independent is to always trust yourself no matter what. This is a big one because if you don't trust on the the things you think about, you let other people look better than you and you're not letting your smartness shine. So maybe you're in gym class and you guys are playing soccer and you get the ball and you pass it instead of shooting it. Like you didn't trust yourself, but relied on someone else. If you trusted yourself you maybe would have made the goal and had the glory. Another example is if you are buying a house and you don't know which one to buy. You ask a friend which one to buy. You should know yourself better than anyone so you shouldn't be asking somebody else for a house that you are buying and calling home just because you don't trust yourself. That's why I think that trusting yourself is important, because you should know what you want or you just never know if you get an achievement for doing what you need to do and not needing anyone's opinion.

My third key point is to change your mind. When I think of this point being independent it brings me 

back to the point of trusting yourself. So the second example I used for trust yourself I talked about how you should trust yourself to pick your house because you should not rely on someone to pick a house for you when you are going to be living there. The reason this point brings me to that is that even if you don't know what house you want is that you can always change your mind on which house you want to pick, or even if you are thinking of looking at new houses. That is one of the reasons I think changing your mind makes you independent. I think changing your mind shows that you have other ideas and that you can think for yourself. independent.

In my essay I talked about the three main point that I talked about in the thesis. I talked about how changing your mind lets you get better looks at stuff and that working hard will bring you the best things in life. Those are the reasons why working hard, changing your mind, and trusting yourself is the rules of being independent.